Long, complex sentences. Theyre the modern turn-off - replacing stuffiness.
Complex? They're sentences that depend on something that follows to make sense. If your sentence doesn't make sense until the second line you are asking your reader to work too hard.
Your report is going to the senior management team or the board. They'll be discussing it at their meeting.
Wow. Heavy stuff. You want to show that you are taking the topic seriously. You'd like them to know that you are a serious thinker too.